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I suppose I should inhale sometime;
every so often keep the intake of breath a constant;
you always take it away from me;
not like a thief;
my breath's a headache, and you're relief;
sometimes I ramble without limitation;
I talk until I can't wring words, regardless of invitation;
I become winded fully.
)

I love you.

(
I am glad I'm speechless,
love, because the way
you speak the world in brushstrokes takes my breath away
)
©2008-2009 *skerd22
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Often, the techniques that seem most simple
speak volumes more than the artist ever knows.
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wow, I love the last line! :) wonderfully done. :+fav:

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Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
Many thanks!

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love the ending best :) beautiful!

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I see what you did there...

You're a tricky one, hahaha.

:D

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"the way
you speak the world in brushstrokes takes my breath away"- aww, i almost cried! :aww:

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the course of true love never did run smooth
~carpe diem~
Thanks for reading it so intently!

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